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Date: December 4, 2024

California Stars – “Wilco and Billy Brag”

“California Stars”, popularized in the 90’s by Wilco and Billy Brag is a song that uses imagery, symbolism, and repetition to convince the listener of the beauty of the destination to be. Originally written by Woody Guthrie during the 1930’s, the band Wilco and Billy Brag revamped the song and made it into a hit.

The work of poetry that is “California Stars” uses repetition throughout the stanzas to cement the idea of California Stars. To understand the Meaning of California Stars you must look past the words to the time in which they were written. Woody Guthrie wrote this poem during the dustbowl. A movement in which people were fleeing the mid-america plane states west in hopes of achieving their dreams in the west.

The first verse of the song and poem California Stars is an excellent example of repetition when it states,

I’d like to rest my heavy head tonight
On a bed of California stars
I’d like to lay my weary bones tonight
On a bed of California stars
I’d love to feel your hand touching mine
And tell me why I must keep working on
Yes, I’d give my life to lay my head tonight
On a bed of California stars

The continued use of the phrase “California Stars” really hammers home the symbolizome of what California was to those destroyed by a storm of dust. People of all kinds were undertaking a mass exodus to the west and the goal of finding farmable land lay in California beneath its stars.

Guthrie further uses vivid imagery when he speaks of,

They hang like grapes on vines that shine

The use of a grape vine creates the image for the listener of an unattainable blessing that tantalizes the onlooker. Captivating their every curiosity with its color and seeming closeness. The Author again uses vivid imagery when he states,

And warm the lovers glass like friendly wine

By using wine or alcohol to illustrate his point he is creating an idea of the almost drunk sensation of the travelers venturing to a second Plymouth Rock in the west.

In conclusion the song continuously uses the idea of “California Stars” and yet the stars that one sees in California are one and the same to that of Colorado, Missouri, Texas, and Nevada. The symbol of the settlers destinations were with them the whole time. By using California Stars as hopes and dreams the author is cultivating a deeper meaning that our hopes and dreams lie with us always, and are not waiting for us anywhere. We will forever be lying on our beds and seeing them in the Stars.

Is “Isn’t She Lovely” by Stevie Wonder Poetry?

Stevie Wonder released “Isn’t She Lovely” in his 1976 album Songs in the Key of Life. The album was a remarkable hit, debuting as the billboard number one album as only the third track to pull off such a feat. Even Wonder himself has acknowledged this album’s significance, repeatedly indicating that it is his favorite album he ever produced. While “Isn’t She Lovely” was not one of the headlining songs in the album, two other songs spent time as the billboard number one song following the release, it is a brilliant display of Wonder’s skill. Encapsulating the overall messaging of the album well and standing the test of time as a jazzy, soulful, and moving piece of art, “Isn’t She Lovely” is some of Stevie Wonder’s best work.

This song’s, and album’s, central focus is around the joys of becoming a father. Wonder is exuberantly showcasing, even bragging about, how wonderful parenthood is. One of the techniques he employs to convey his message is the use of rhetorical questions. The song begins:

Isn’t she lovely?
Isn’t she wonderful?
Isn’t she precious?

With three consecutive rhetorical questions serving as the opening act for the song, the listener is not surprised when more rhetorical questions crop up throughout the melody. These insistent questions serve a dual purpose. On the surface level, they are Stevie Wonder reaching out and bringing his joy to others. He cannot contain himself, so, and the listener can almost imagine Wonder holding his baby out in a stranger’s face here, he implores someone else to affirm the “lovely” and “wonderful” and “precious” nature of his child.

However, these questions also allude to lingering doubts about whether Wonder is ready for fatherhood. Asking all of these questions, it appears that the affirmation sought is not just regarding how cute his child is, but how good the situation is. Do people approve? Is what he doing right? He is pleading for certainty, asking someone to give him a definite answer.

This hesitancy can also be seen in the purposeful use of collective and then singular pronouns. Early in the song, Wonder claims responsibility with the mother for their child.

I never thought through love we’d be
Making one as lovely as she
But isn’t she lovely made from love?

Here, the pronoun “we” is utilized. Later though, in a part of the song with near identical structure, Wonder removes himself from the equation.

Without you who conceived the one
That’s so very lovely made from love

This stanza comes at the very end of the song, indicating that after thought, Wonder believes that the ultimate source of the loveliness inherited by his child is from the mother. Solidifying this meaning, Wonder removes the question mark that tainted his first statement. In giving all credit to the mother, and doubting himself, Wonder finds a statement of fact that does not need a question mark following it.

Wonder also alludes to religion in this song to convey the true heights of his joy.

I can’t believe what God has done
Through us, He’s given life to one

By incurring a higher power, Wonder again removes himself from control. Yet here, the more impactful reason for this usage is that it shows to the listener how immensely wonderful having a child really is. With no human ability to fall back on to explain being a father, Wonder uses his last recourse and simply claims a higher power is responsible.

The victory lap: “heart pt. 6”

The song I am defending as poetry is “heart pt. 6” by Kendrick Lamar on his newest album, GNX. For context, whenever Kendrick releases a new album, he either includes another addition to his heart songs or drops the addition before the rest of the album. For example, before his 2022 album, Mr. Morale & The Big Steppers, Kendrick dropped “The Heart Part 5” before he released the rest of the album. Each addition to “The Heart” series dives into Kendrick’s personal experiences as he has advanced through the music industry, his cultural inspiration, and other things. Each song is like a memento Kendrick produces to express his gratitude for how far he has come in the music industry and rap game.

Kendrick’s first poetic device that stood out to me in the song came with the lines:

Me and Rock inside the booth, hibernatin’

It was smple math, he made it, that mean I made it

These lines do two things. First, they show Kendrick reflecting on his long-standing relationship with friend and fellow rapper Jay Rock. Kendrick and Jay Rock both began their careers together. They watched each other excel and take over the music industry, so this line adds to Kendrick’s reflection on his personal experiences and his relationships on his way to the top of the music industry. Second, the metaphor of Kendrick and Jay Rock hibernating in the booth shows Kendrick’s dedication to his craft, demonstrating how much time and care he puts into his music and how intentional he is when writing every line. These lines show Kendrick’s appreciation for the people close to him and his craft, adding to the song’s message about his gratitude for how far he has come.

Another use of poetic device was used in the line:

Punch played Phil Jackson in my early practices

In this line, Kendrick used a metaphor to compare Punch, the president of Top Dawg Entertainment, to NBA coach Phil Jackson, who was best known for coaching the Bulls during their six championships during the ’90s, but also having coached other teams such as the Los Angeles Lakers. With this line, Kendrick is giving Punch a nod. By comparing him to a coach as legendary as Phil Jackson, Kendrick is again demonstrating his gratefulness for those who helped kickstart him on his music journey and helped propel him further into the game.

Kendrick adds another layer of complexity to the song with the lines:

Put my heart on display like it was an iMac

To all my young n*****, let me be the demonstration

In these lines, Kendrick is again saying two things. First, with the simile comparing his heart to an iMac, something that is regularly shown off or put on display in things like Apple stores. With this comparison, he is saying that he no longer feels the need to hide his emotions, a nod to the gradual transformation of his songs, where he started to rap more and more about the social and mental issues he was dealing with. This again highlights Kendrick’s storytelling and shows his growth throughout his time in the music industry. Second, Kendrick says that he is now in a moment in his life where he has begun a transformation. He no longer sees his main goal as learning from others but teaching others. He wants to be the “demonstration” to the youth on how to become as successful as he is in the rap game.

Overall, “heart pt. 6” is a great example of how to brag about how far you have come without appearing self-centered or egotistical. Kendrick makes the song appear almost as instructions on how to be successful. He continually highlights his influential moments and people he has met along the way, giving each one a specific nod and acknowledging its impact on his life. Kendrick’s use of figurative language and other poetic techniques truly takes this song to another level and truly enhances his message. It is by far my favorite song off his new album, and I intend to listen to it for years to come.

“Where Skies are Blue” by The Lumineers

“Where Skies are Blue,” from The Lumineers’ 2022 album Brightside, is a striking reflection of the emotional struggle of still loving someone after you have parted ways with them and cheering them on from a distance.  The narrator sings,

“You can alway find me where skies are blue”

symbolizing that the narrator will always be there for this person as a force of good, as blue skies are associated with happiness and goodness. This is a message to the narrator’s past lover insinuating if they are ever lost or looking for love the narrator will always be available.

Furthermore, during the bridge, the metaphor

“Lay your dreams, little darlin’, in a flower bed,

Let that sunshine in your hair,”

illustrates the narrator wanting their past lover to pursue and nurture their dreams through the idea of gardening with sunlight and soil in order for those aspirations to come true and blossom. Further illustrating how the narrator only wants the best for them.

Lastly, the metaphor of “bleeding,” from the line

“You’re gonna bleed somebody’s brand new love, mama

Who’s gonna feel just like it always do”

suggests the intensity of emotional pain and that part of love is getting hurt, while the phrase “just like it always do” suggests that these emotions follow a pattern—repeating over time, like the change of seasons or the passage of time.

Through vivid images and metaphors, the listener experiences an emotional journey of making peace with something that has been lost. Ultimately, “Where Skies are Blue” is a poetic reflection on the human experience of love, pain, and the cyclical nature of relationships.

Stan by Eminem

The poetic masterpiece “Stan” by Eminem has many examples of multidimensial language that adds to its overall impact. The song unfolds as a story through letters written by Eminem’s fan, Stan, and Eminem’s response.

Stan’s first letter creates a tone of admiration and hope, reading, “I’m your biggest fan” and “I hope you get this man, hit me back.” Then, as the song progresses, Stan’s second letter begins to shift the tone to desperation and anger. Stan writes, “I just think it’s fucked up you don’t answer fans” and “we waited in the blistering cold for you, for four hours.”

Additionally, at the end of this letter his feelings further escalate, saying, “Sometimes I even cut myself to see how much it bleeds” and “We should be together too.” This mood intensifies as the song goes on, especially the last time Stan speaks, in a cassette. Stan is talking while he’s “doin’ ninety on the freeway.” Stan then says, “I drank a fifth of vodka, you dare me to drive?” Now the audience begins to learn that Stan is emotionally unstable and mentally ill. He then says, “you couda rescued me from drownin,” letting us know that he plans to kill himself. He also describes that his pregnant girlfriend is tied up in the trunk. At this point, we are at the climax of the story. Stan blames Eminem for his abuse of his girlfriend and himself because he doesn’t feel validated elsewhere and probably has extreme depression, bipolar disorder, or some other mental health issue. The story of Stan culminates when he drives off the bridge.

In between these letters, Vocalist Dido repeats the chorus that includes the line, “The morning rain clouds up my window, and I can’t see at all.” Dido’s soothing and melancholic chorus not only creates a tone of somber but also serves as a contrast to Stan’s increasingly erratic and violent verses. This juxtaposition highlights Stan’s suffering because of his mental health and emotional turmoil.

The next verse is from Eminem’s perspective, but it is in response to the second letter, he doesn’t know about the cassette yet. He explains that he couldn’t reply because he was busy and tells him to get counseling. He then writes about how he recalls a drunk driver driving his girlfriend over a bridge and then he realizes: “come to think about it, his name was, it was you.” This part is so powerful because Eminem probably feels some of the guilt for his death because he didn’t get back to him sooner, but it also represents situational irony because the audience knew what Stan did, but Eminem didn’t know until now. This builds suspense and emotion, adding to the desperation and even pity for Stan. Yes, Stan did some very bad things like kill his girlfriend and beat her, but he had received proper help it may have been avoided, and he could live happy. The song ends with this realization.

I could also talk about the rhyme scheme and how it adds to the urgent and anxious tone, but this blog has gotten pretty long already. “Stan” is rich in poetic techniques which add to its impact on the listener. I’ve felt many strong emotions when I listen to this song, and it is indicative of the successfulness of Eminem’s multidimensional language.

This is the link to the lyrics Eminem – Stan

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