Story Power

Blogging the Lit Life

Category: Exit West (Page 1 of 4)

Were Nadia and Saeed doomed from the start?

Nadia and Saeed of Exit West are foils. Nadia is adventurous; Saeed is cautious. Nadia wants to travel the world; Saeed is perfectly content to mostly stay home. Nadia is nontraditional; Saeed finds solace in religion. I think these aspects compliment each other more than they clash against each other. They are both willing to compromise and do what they can to make their relationship work. Going through a war would have broken up all but the strongest couples. They said themselves, they were forced too close together. In an ideal world, they would have been safe to be themselves, and maybe they wouldn’t have broken up.

 

Can People Maintain A Relationship During Difficult Times They Both Go Through?

In the novel Exit West by Mohsin Hamid, a love story is one of the first things that we are hit with when it comes to Saeed and Nadia. They both start from becoming strangers with a complete 180-degree background when it comes to their family, to later becoming lovers. Nadia managed to finally ease up when meeting Saeed and finally showed appreciation towards him. From moving to different locations through the mysterious doors, along with others.

This begs the question of whether it’s possible to have a relationship at that time. They were both very affectionate towards each other while dealing with the huge war that was going on throughout their lives, always managing to meet back with each other and bonding time and time again, whether that would be meeting with each other or a simple check-up on the phone.

Even throughout all of the struggles that they went through, they ended things off. Which makes me think whether they were first in the relationship to protect each other during the war that was going on, or did they truly feel something for each other before it slowly went south because of all the migration to different countries. There was no known villain between them that caused their relationship to end, but a different set of views. I think this is a case where a relationship cannot work with both parties experiencing the same difficulties. Rather than fixing it, they ended it.

 

What is a Home? – Exit West

In the final chapter of Exit West, Mohsin Hamid shows how the meaning of “home” evolves through migration, time, and one’s experiences. When Saeed and Nadia meet again after fifty years, neither of them finds great comfort in returning to their home country, even though it is no longer under the control of the militia. This suggests that their idea of “home” is no longer tied to a physical location, but is rather the people they met and the experiences that they had. The two of them don’t make attempts to rekindle their relationship or indulge in the nostalgia of their hometown; they are merely content with the outcome of their situations and find comfort that their relationship helped create the person they are today. By not trapping themselves in the past, they are able to move on, suggesting that “home” is not a singular place or destination, but internal and a lifelong process of adaptation. This final chapter can be further connected to the passage of the older lady. Her whole life has occurred and revolved around that one house. Yet, after a lifetime, her house does not feel like “home”. Since the departure of her family, friends, and neighbors, the meaning of her house loses its feeling, developing the idea that “home” is not one place, but rather the experiences and connections a person has.

The Power of Community and How It Split Saeed and Nadia- Exit To The West.

In the book Exit To The West by Moshin Hamid, community is a very important aspect of life. Similarity to real life, being around people who understand you and your views on the world can be an amazing feeling. While one can find community in a person, but having a group of people you can talk to about things is amazing. This is shown throughout the book, through Saeed’s attachment to him and Nadia’s neighbors in Britain, and his connection to the preacher’s daughter.

To begin, One of the book’s big showings of how important community can be is when Nadia and Saeed go through their first door to Britain. When they’re meeting the new people in this foreign place, Nadia has a much easier time adjusting compared to Saeed. Nadia is able to better empathize and talk with the Nigerian people they meet, while Saeed struggles to make friends unfamiliar with their culture. He ends up making friends with their next door neighbors who come from their home country, he becomes confused about how Nadia doesn’t feel a similar way. This all stems from the differences in the communities and environments they were raised in. Nadia being a woman in a community that had a very strict set of rules women had to live by, she struggled to fit in because they refused to understand her. Meanwhile Saeed being a man in this community allowed him to better accept their culture and become more in tune with it compared to Nadia.

Moving forward, A second example the book gives, is when Saeed builds a connection to the preacher’s daughter. The connection they build is based around Saeed’s homeland and where the preacher’s daughter’s mother is from, because the preacher practices the religion from Saeed’s homeland. She understands Saeed’s ties to religion and family and how these two things tie him to a community he has been separated from. Giving him a new family to share these interests with, this is something Nadia can neither do for Saeed nor understand. She knows how important religion is to Saeed and how it connects him to his family, but she cannot understand it on any level past empathy for Saeed, she doesn’t much care for their homeland’s religion. She never bonded with many in that community besides Saeed, and her family was never that close. Their views on the culture of their homeland created a rift in their relationship

The importance of one being able to bond with those around them through means of similar interest,  and gain access to a community that they can converse with is extremely important. Humans are social creatures through nature, and this book helps show it. Once Saeed and Nadia were no longer able to converse, they’re relationship began to slowly dissolve. Even though they still loved each other, they were unable to relate to one another. Opening a door to a new part of their lives, a part where they were not together.

Beyond the Doorway: Displacement, Migration, Love, Loss, Hope

When living in a country far from regular/daily destruction it is easy to lose the grip of reality. We learn that the main characters Saeed and Nadia live somewhere based on the city Lahore, Pakistan. Although living 2 different lives before they met (Nadia who left her family to live on her own as an independent woman, Saeed a family man) we know the commonality is their city is in the middle of a war and it becomes dangerous to live there. Mohsin Hamid incorporates the magical door into the story as a gateway for people to instantly travel across the world. Back to what I said at the start when the reader puts 2 and 2 together these doors symbolize migration.

Moshin Hamid’s “Exit West” is not just a story about migration it is the exploration and navigation of love and connection during displacement. Through the main characters Nadia and Saeed we see the harsh realities many live through leaving their home and enduring the power of love in a world that’s constantly changing. The magical doors symbolize the unpredictable paths migrants take to go to unfamiliar and often unwelcoming places. “For when we migrate, we murder from our lives those we leave behind”(End of chapter 5).

Migration now especially with the political and economic state of the U.S right now is seen in the process. The book refers to armed militants/guards sending people back when going through the door could even kill them. “…the doors to richer destinations, were heavily guarded, but … the doors from poorer places, were mostly left unsecured”(106,chapter 6) Saeed ends up leaving his family to go through the door with Nadia just as many families leave behind their home, culture, and identity behind to go through for a better chance of survival. It is sad though because of how much SA Nadia had to go through as a woman even when she made herself look more intimidating and had safety precautions (face veil especially for Saeed when first met). Migrants aren’t just masses of people but individuals with unique stories and dreams searching for safety and a place to call home.

Nadia and Saeed’s love. They were good for each other in a way. Nadia was so used to her way being THE way that a lot of the things she did and said was questionable. They were opposites in things but some would argue that is why they were good for each other. Nadia’s key moments when it comes to their love was how often she would talk about wanting to have sex with Saeed even when he wasn’t comfortable to do so yet. Total opposites, Saeed family oriented, religious, Nadia independent spirit. Saeed sought comfort from religion and Nadia embraced new environments. Saeed was compromise to stay together and feel connected to their old lives while conflict arose. Initially their relationship was mutual and in recognition. Then the unfamiliar lands deepened their bond. However the pressures of survival and new freedom did test their freedom. They begin to clash. The separation, oh so bittersweet, they ended up with others just like them. From strangers to friends, friends into lovers, lovers to friends then strangers again.

I had to take a deep breathe when they didn’t meet anymore to discuss their lives. How could someone so important to a person at one point in time mean less at a different point. This story is beautiful in it’s way of teaching.

Are We Really a “Melting Pot”?

In the end of Exit West, Moshin Hamid paints a vivid picture of a multicultural world. In his reality, people blended their cultures together to create something new and beautifully complex. It reminded me of the cliche that “the US is a melting pot”– a phrase that was repeated throughout early education when describing the cultural landscape of the US. But the more I thought about this phrase, the less it made sense.

My first thoughts went back to the mass immigrations of Europeans to the US in the 19th and 20th centuries. The pattern seemed cyclical: every new group that came to the US — whether it was the Irish or Italians or Eastern European Jews — faced opposition. This illuminated a couple things about the core sentiments of the US. First, it shows the how feelings of anti popery (or crudely anti Catholicism), stemming from the creation of the US, were still prevalent. During the late 19th, the US saw the creation of a nativist party, the Know Nothings. These nativists sowed the fear of immigrants in Americans. For example, nativists claimed that the Pope was sending Catholics to come take over the US. They exploited peoples fear of unemployment by telling them that the immigrants were coming to take their jobs. Also, they would perpetuate stereotypes that immigrants were morally compromised, either being drunkards or uneducated. Bearing the brunt of these suspicions were the Irish and Italians who were most commonly Catholic, but Germans were tied at times as well.

Then, in the beginning of the 20th century, demographics of immigrants shifted from European Catholics to Eastern and Southern Europeans who were seeking alyssum from religious persecution and social instability. As the demographics shifted, so did the targets. Instead of the Pope’s plan to take over the US, nativists exploited Americans’ fears of socialism and communism by linking immigrants to the social unrest in Europe. They also utilized pseudoscience to prove the racial inferiority of these immigrants. The following period from 1924-1946 institutionalized anti immigration sentiments by enacting quotas on immigrants (Immigration Act of 1924). Specifically during the war period we see rising suspicions about immigrants culminating in Executive Order 9066 that removed Japanese immigrants and their families from their homes and relocated them to camps in the desert. There is a relative break away from anti immigration sentiments during the Cold War, most likely a manifestation of the geopolitical strategy of the US.

As I revisited these movements in history, I realized that the rhetoric used against immigrants barely changed. It also drew scary parallels between discussions had a century ago and those of today. Considering the continuing conversations and protest surrounding immigration from the past to the present, I find that the “melting pot” is an overly idealistic and romanticized view of the US.

Should Nadia and Saeed Have Stayed Together?

There are many factors to consider when deciding to stay together versus let the other go. Some important things for them to consider in their situation were not just their values or outlook on the future, but also safety and the ability to survive and live as comfortably as possible. I don’t think they should have stayed together because it was evident that many of their values and goals in life didn’t align. But staying together seemed to be the better option for both of them. It is safest to be with someone you know, which allows them to look out for and take care of each other. They each had their strengths and different connections they could utilise. Using their combined resources, it would be much easier to survive and create a more stable living space. Also, being with someone you trust in such trying times provides so much comfort and fights the loneliness they each must have felt as they left their homes behind. Staying together was certainly the most practical option, but at what cost? 

First of all, their values didn’t align. Saeed greatly valued his religion and felt very deeply connected to his nationality. He prayed every day and relied on his faith to guide him through the struggles he faced alongside Nadia. However, Nadia was not religious and never prayed with him. She was never disrespectful about it; she simply didn’t value religion the same way that Saeed did. When Saeed wanted to sacrifice some of their comfort of living in their own room in the Nigerian house to move into a house of people from their own country, Nadia refused. This demonstrates Saeed’s deep connection to his people and how he would give up his comfort to revive his relationship with his culture. Conversely, this demonstrates how Nadia doesn’t value their culture in the same way and would choose the comfort of their own room over joining a community of people from their culture. Nadia dresses very traditionally, in a very modest, long black robe every day. However, she doesn’t justify this in reference to its cultural significance or as a religious regulation, but as simply something she does for herself or to protect herself from men. Saeed critiques how she refuses to align herself with their religion or culture, showing a clear disparity in their values. 

Additionally, Saeed seeks familiarity, comfort, and the establishment of a more stable life. In contrast, Nadia seeks a new life and a new future for herself. This disparity in their ways of life and outlook on the future affects how they move forward. Nadia is eager to keep moving and find new things, while in every place they visit, Saeed tries to make it feel like home. This clear difference in their characters demonstrates their incompatibility as they don’t want the same life. They cannot create a life together that satisfies each of their wants and needs. Therefore, I think it was for the best that they broke up, allowing them to move in different directions. 

What the doors really are “Exit West”

The imagery of the door in exist west are repeated multiple times. Hammid talks about them being complete darkness, people crawling out exhausted, unsure of whats on the end. But yet they are still willing to walk through. Rather than a magical door, I think Hamid is really just using these to express what real-world immigration looks like for those seeking asylum. People may give massive amounts of money, like as seen in the agent, to someone they do not know, purely out of hope that they can trust them. They are smuggled around in precarious situations and horrible conditions simply for the chance at a better life. As seen in those border x rays were people sew themelves into car seats, lay down in oil tanks, and go to great measure simply for a chance. And many times when they finally make it out, they arent greeted wth the amazing world they think of. This is clearly emphasized in the rest of the novel.

Saeed and Traditionalism in Exit West

Throughout the book Exit West, Saeed maintains an incredibly complicated relationship with his homeland. At the start of the book he seems uncommitted to his culture and faith, only loosely following due to his parents religious beliefs. However, the further Saeed migrates from his country, the closer his connection to its beliefs become.

This becomes incredibly clear in Britain, when Saeed and Nadia live within the Nigerian house in London. While Nadia embraces the new people surrounding her, Saeed instead finds his own people from his country, fleeing to their house repeatedly to engage in prayer and simply converse. While some may claim this is just a shield Saeed is putting up to keep himself safe from a changing world, I think his return to tradition is a sign of his own independence. Throughout their migration, Nadia is attempting the entire time to isolate herself from their homeland. By taking up traditions only maintained back at home, Saeed demonstrates his own personal independence in choosing to revere the culture that raised him.

Growing Apart

I think the idea of Nadia vs. Saeed in their respective ability to handle change, and their separation, has a lot to do with how much they appreciated their previous lives. Saeed remains connected to his home country because he enjoyed his life, and misses his loving family, where Nadia almost welcomes change since she doesn’t especially like her parents, although she is still curious about their wellbeing, and associates their home country with her bad experiences in that country. Because of this Nadia had no problems in adapting to the new circumstances, while Saeed struggled to accept his new life fully, leading to him experiencing a lot of stress to the point of bitterness. This discrepancy is also what ultimately leads to them growing apart.

Saeed remains attached to his family, prayer being the medium, while Nadia seeks new companions and bond in the new environment they find themselves in. Nadia quickly becomes friends with all kinds of people without bias, while Saeed still seeks the people from his homeland. For example, when the both of them are living in London in the rich family’s house, Saeed finds and talks to some people from his country, whom offer him a stay in their house under worse conditions from what they were living in at the time. Yet, he still asks Nadia to move into the house, not even recognizing that she might not want to until she brings it up. This and other events in that house is what started to separate the two characters, where they first fond they no longer longed for each other and where they first found they opinions in conflict, because one wanted to start a new life while the other wanted his old one back.

The Gender Roles Between Saeed and Nadia’s Characters

In Exit West, by Mohsin Hamid, Saeed and Nadia are constantly changing throughout the story. At first, Nadia and Saeed appear to be two people who are just getting to know each other, Saeed being more timid around Nadia while Nadia is more in her own element, focusing on how to become her own independent woman.

Throughout the story, although they remain close to each other, we see Nadia conform to the roles of the stereotypical woman at the time, someone who relies on a man to support her. However, it is quite the opposite, when Nadia and Saeed are stranded, we see the stress of the situation get to Saeed, Saeed becomes bitter, a quality of which has never been attributed to him before. Resulting in Nadia having to take charge of their situation, she set up camp, she negotiated for their food, she reached help on the phone faster than Saeed did. As the story went on, Nadia got closer and closer to her goals of becoming independent, while also growing farther and farther away from Saeed, almost refuting the gender roles in place at their time.

Maria, Nadia, and Independence

Finishing “Trust” by Hal Hartley and “Exit West” by Mohsin Hamid as a seventeen year old girl applying for college, I am learning what it means to be an independent woman through the different experiences of both Maria and Nadia.

By the end of both stories, Nadia and Maria both dedicate themselves to independence, from men, from children, and from family. Yet, in Nadia’s situation, it is somewhat unclear whether or not her new girlfriend replaces Saheed in her life. Nadia seems to be trying to adapt to change and stay true to herself while Maria is trying to adapt to change and become a better, more focused person because of it. This is because Nadia is not the reason for the difficult change, and Maria is (or at least feels like she is) the reason.

In terms of relationships, both of their paths are inspiring to me in different ways. Maria’s path is inspiring because I believe there is always something to learn about yourself when your relationship does not work out. Maria also seems to see marriage as incompatible with independence and growth. However, Nadia has a more sustainable outlook on love. On page 218 when she meets the cook, she doesn’t see finding a new girlfriend as harmful to her independence, she can keep the two at the same time (or so we assume). This, then, is the most inspiring in the long term. It is the difference between being naturally dependent (Maria) and naturally independent (Nadia). As someone who is not naturally independent, I believe that it’s in some ways necessary to have Maria’s outlook before Nadia’s can be adopted. Overall, they both inspire me to choose a college fully based on my own growth, and live my life centered around my own independence.

 

Effect of migration in Exit West

In Exit West, Mohsin Hamid shows us that Migration is not just traveling from one place to another, but also an emotional experience. The books depict the experiences of Saeed and Nadia as they leave their homes due to the violence of war. People in the novel can travel through mysterious doors that lead to new countries, mostly privileged countries. The doors symbolize modern migration, illustrating that crossing a border marks the beginning of change. Although the door makes the people feel safe, it doesn’t take away the fear fully away and the struggle to get comfortable with your family is also a struggle to adjust. Mohsin Hamid used the doors to show that migration is not just about leaving a place, but also changing some of your identity to fit into a new culture or environment. For example, in a out current day, many immigrants have to learn a lot to fit into this country, for example, learning English, which is hard to learn, especially if you have just come into the country as an adult.

Hamid also questions the idea that migration is uncommon or temporary. Instead, he sees migration as a big part of human life, where it shows diversity, opportunity, and hope for those who need it for a better quality of life. A big example of this is immigrants who come from different countries, because they do not feel safe and are coming here for a better life. As Saeed and Nadia move from one place to another, their relationship shifts from being really close with each other to being distant, showing changes that migration can cause. The novels show us that change is inevitable in a changing world. Through the novel, Hamid explains to us that in reality, we are all migrants, seeking a better future.

Magic in the Real World

When I was first reading Exit West, the magical doors felt out of place because they appeared in a world that is otherwise very realistic, closely resembling our own. Hamid also doesn’t explain their existence, simply stating that they started to appear randomly. As the novel is set in modern times, filled with familiar cities, technology, and political conflicts that feel tangible, the doors seem out of place in the story’s world.
However, I believe Hamid did this intentionally. The doors serve as a powerful symbol, representing migration and the human desire to escape danger happening in their homes. While the doors themselves could be a part of a fantasy book, people’s reactions—ranging from fear and confusion to hope—feel incredibly real. Since the rest of the narrative addresses serious issues like war and displacement, the doors are meant to highlight these themes rather than seamlessly fit into a fantasy setting.

Resurgence Routes

In Exit West by Mohsin Hamid, passing through the magic doors is depicted as a rebirth for migrants. It presents a complex view on the migrant journey: Rather than just a shift in location, there is also a shift in one’s identity during the process. For example, the journey through the doors was described as wet and tiring. This showed similarities to birth physically, however, it also presents more than just a literal rebirth. When leaving your country and homeland behind, you are forced to leave parts of you as well. Your identity is forced to morph. While you hold on to key parts of your past life, you also have to let some go. Being in a new location comes with assimilation in some form. Whether this is mixing cultures or accepting a new way of life these are super common when moving countries. Saeed and Nadia are faced with these choices following their passing through doors; every single time. While its sad, it also presents new opportunity, such as that of a newborn baby who has the whole world to shape for themselves. While rebirth can be daunting, Hamid portrays it as a milestone in every migrant’s journey.

Why ‘Our Kind’ Is Arbitrary in Exit West

In chapter 8 of Exit West by Mohsin Hamid, Saeed and Nadia are in London, in a quarter of London overflowing with migrant populations from all across the world. Yet, even as cultures mix, they begin to separate as if oil and water, and houses start to become full of people from the same walks of life instead of being the diverse temporary homes they were before. Saeed feels ostracized and alone as the house he and Nadia are staying in becomes predominantly Nigerian, and begins spending more and more time at a house down the street full of people from his own country. He wants to move in, where he would feel welcome and safe. On page 153, when he suggests this to Nadia, she doesn’t react how he expected:

 

“Why would we want to move?” she said.

“To be among our own kind.”

“What makes them our kind?”

“They’re from our country.”

“From the country we used to be from.”

“Yes.” Saeed tried not to sound annoyed.

“We’ve left that place.”

“That doesn’t mean we have no connection.”

“They’re not like me.”

“You haven’t met them.”

 

For me, this is a pivotal point in the novel that highlights the fundamental theme of the novel; that borders hardly matter in a world where people aren’t forced to stay by circumstance. ‘Our kind’ is an attempt to forge connections amongst strangers for a sense of safety, but it’s hard to maintain in such a new world when others intend to move on. 

There are countless scenes that illustrate this throughout the book, but chapter 8 is full of them. One is Nadia’s relationship with the council of Nigerian elders from the row of predominantly-Nigerian houses. (pg. 147-148) The people of those three houses are only nominally ‘Nigerian,’ as many come from families split across arbitrary borders or from entirely different villages who even speak separate languages. They have found ‘their kind,’ but it’s a loose definition, and soon, with Nadia, they embrace her as one of them and ‘our kind’ immediately becomes void in favor of forging new connections in the diverse world beyond the doors.

Even Saeed, later on, comes to realize this. While he feels a connection to the preacher’s daughter, whose mother was from his country, he builds a community between himself and the others in his cooperative, who were not. As settlements are established, people seek out ‘their kind’ less and less, until society is truly diverse all across the world. 

It’s an incredible message, and Hamid’s writing paints a picture of how the world could be without borders.

Why Exit West Rambles

Mohsin Hamid’s novel, Exit West, utilizes a special narration style that is very unique to the novel, and it accomplishes a lot in terms of telling the story. Hamid’s sentences tend to ramble on for much longer than they traditionally would, lending itself to paragraphs and sometimes even pages that are entirely one sentence. These long sentences manage to contribute many different moods despite their similar structures.

One instance of this is on page 122, the second paragraph. It reads “They waited for a while but knew they could not stay in this hotel room forever…” then it continues on until the sentence concludes which “…they were in a house of some kind, surely a palace, with rooms upon rooms and marvels upon marvels, and taps that gushed water that was like spring water and was white with bubbles and felt soft, yes soft, to the touch.” This sentence, in contrast to the other example, reads very smoothly, gently, as though the sentence is the water described in it. It displays a feeling of peace and calm as well as admiration and awe. Even though this sentence is structured nearly identically to many others in the story, it conveys vast emotion on its own.

While most of the time, this serves the narrative in terms of managing to display a set of complex themes, it also distinguishes Hamid’s writing from the crowd. While these sentences can sometimes be quite the hassle to read, leaving any speaker out of breath and any reader winded, Exit West requires unique prose to tell the story effectively and thematically.

One key example of this is on page 74, where the long sentences serves to both elaborate on an emotion and also reveal a theme of the story. The sentence begins at the bottom of the page: “But part of her still resisted the idea of moving in with him…and also finding the idea of living as a chaste half-lover, half-sister to Saeed in close proximity with his parents rather bizarre, and she might have waited much longer had Saeed’s mother not been killed…stayed with them that night to offer what comfort and help she could and did not spend another night in her own apartment again.”

The interruption in the middle of the sentence, regarding Saeed’s mother’s death, shocks the reader just as if a loved one was killed in their own life: suddenly and without preface, interrupting their own thoughts about their life and way of being. It is in this way that Hamid manages to make the reader feel the same kind of grief as Nadia: missing someone important to characters in her life that she cares about despite having never known her, because all at once, Saeed’s mother is gone from the world.

A similar example that is less emotionally devastating is towards the end of the novel on page 230. While the sentence is shorter than the previous example it still manages to convey a great deal about the story: “Their conversation navigated two lives, with vital details highlighted and excluded, and it was also a dance, for they were former lovers….imagine how different it would be if I had agreed to have sex with you, and Nadia said we were having sex, and Saeed considered and smiled and said yes I suppose we were.”

In the ambling curves of this sentence, the reader can sense both the time that has passed and the fondness that still lingers between them. There is a bittersweetness in the words that is displayed by the long sentence, and it fills the reader with the same grief and joy that Nadia and Saeed are feeling in seeing each other again after all this time separated from each other.

It is in this way that Exit West requires its unique prose, especially when expertly wielded by an author like Hamid. Without these long, seemingly run-on sentences, Exit West would not have the same impact, and the deep humanity of the emotional writing as well as its complex, varied themes would be buried under more simple language, which would distract from the beauty and meaning of the story.

Migrant-pocalypse

The overarching plot of the novel Exit West is that mysterious doors which can take anyone in the world anywhere in the world, have caused what seems at first to be a “Migrant-pocalypse”. Of course, Mohsin Hamid (the author) turns this on its head to argue that this wouldn’t be an apocalypse at all, but instead a uptopia.

Now, I understand this is a work of fiction, and so it is by definition unrealistic at times, but in what world would this ever prove to be anything less than catastrophic? In the book, Saeed and Nadia leave their home country because of the terrible conflict which has been brewing there and eventually spirals out of control. Understandable, however they do so through magical doors which seemingly anyone can access. If anyone can access them, it’s safe to assume that everyone would want to use them, as everyone wants to leave. If a conflicting nation loses the people it’s conflicting over, what happens? They more than likely begin to use the doors as well. These doors lead to people’s homes most of the time, if some armed military people from some other country just started coming through a portal in my closet which I have no way of closing, I’d be forced to move. I’m assuming that’s the point though, more fortunate people being forced to move because of their circumstances, an almost identical situation to most migrants. Honestly, I don’t even know where this is going I just wanted to ponder the idea of rebellious armed soldiers coming from a civil war straight to my house. I guess it wouldn’t really matter, what could I do to stop it? Something like the London halo isn’t a terrible idea, but that doesn’t close the doors. Nothing, and no one would be safe around doors anymore, we’d just have to get rid of anything that even remotely resembles a doorway, and maybe construct one big one, like a monitored terminal, for people to come through safely.

Phones and Freedom in Exit West

In Exit West, phones start out as symbols of freedom. When Saeed and Nadia first connect, it’s through their phones that they escape the rules of their city. Hamid says, “phones had become indispensable, because they were the portals through which much of life was mediated” (40). That line always makes the phone feel like its own kind of door. Before the literal doors show up, people are already slipping through digital ones.

But that freedom doesn’t last. Once they flee, the phone stops being a tool of connection and becomes a reminder of what they’ve lost. Saeed keeps checking his “even though there was no one left to call” (94). The same thing that once gave him privacy and choice now traps him in memory. This represents how the things that feel like liberation at first can also isolate us.

A Bittersweet Romance

Exit West by Mohsin Hamid challenges many key points of life that have been discussed throughout history and which continue to be topics of discussion to this day. Themes involving love, gender, immigration, religion all appear throughout the journey of Saeed and Nadia. Hamid’s depiction of love was one of my favorites in the novel as I was fascinated by how it could be analyzed in so many different ways.

Saeed and Nadia’s love tells a universal tale of intimacy and friendship and protection where unforgettable memories are made and tender moments are shared. Hamid introduces the two main characters in the beginning of the story as curious lovebirds who are excited and entranced by the others’ presence, online or in person. Their relationship could have looked a lot like what we see in movies and read in romance novels, even similar to how Saeed’s parent’s marriage was described. However, as the conflict in their city intensifies, they are confronted with the notion that their relationship won’t always be one of order and constants. As the instability of war and riots brings the couple closer together, their need for each other is based on companionship and safety; they might even see the other as a reminder of the life they left behind after passing through the door. The trauma they share because of that experience may have been what led to their feelings of separateness later in the book. A trauma-bond. At one point they were inseparable and seemed to be totally aligned in their wanting to be together, but once hardship struck they began to drift apart. 

I think Hamid handles this complex relationship in an incredibly mature and thoughtful way. Saeed and Nadia aren’t presented as people who seek out arguments or conflict – instead they decide to be open with each other despite the painful emotional process leading up to that confrontation. The bond they built together had a strong foundation, so even after they go their separate ways towards the end of the novel their separation was accepted mutually and was even able to be bridged once they are old and meet back in their hometown.

Hamid ingeniously wrote the ending of Exit West as bittersweet because while the two characters don’t end up together, they still share such poignant memories that inevitably draw them close despite the different paths they ended up taking and that is such a human experience that should be depicted more often in media.

Vignettes in Exit West

In Exit West, by Mohsin Hamid, I noticed that there were multiple abrupt short stories about random people. When first reading these stories, I didn’t understand the significance of most of them, but I realize now that they greatly built on the themes of the story.

For example, Hamid wrote about an old woman in Palo Alto who had lived in the same house her entire life, but noticed that her neighborhood and society were constantly changing. She claimed that her children “were motivated by money, money they spent without having, which she had never done, always saving for a rainy day, even if only a little” (208). The difference in her children’s values and her own shows how much society can change over time, and even if one doesn’t move, they still experience change because their community as a whole is affected.

Furthermore, Hamid wrote about a mute, elderly woman in Marrakesh who is visited by her daughter and asked to escape the country through a magic door. The maid believed that “she was not wanted by the world, and here she was at least known, and she was tolerated, and that was a blessing” (224). The maid refused her daughter’s request because she couldn’t imagine leaving the only place she had ever known, and she feared how she would be treated as an immigrant. This story served as a vignette to represent the people who couldn’t immigrate to a safer country, whether it be from fear or a situation preventing them.

The Grass Isn’t Always Greener on the Other Side

In Mohsin Hamid’s 2017 novel Exit West, Hamid writes on the brutalities of war and migration with a magical twist on the use of teleporting doors. Throughout the novel, Saeed and Nadia finds themselves traveling through many doors to seek new opportunities, supposedly better than what was before. With a solid chunk of the book taking place in the brutal town that they are from, we are left with the idea that they must leave because anything is better than what they are in. Then shortly after, they travel through one door taking them to Mykonos where they stay in a migrant camp. The conditions are brutal, with cold winters, leading to Saeed and Nadia to slowly fall apart. They leave the camp to go to London where the electricity is not available to them. To add to that, it was not a relatively safe community, with nativists looking to attack and everyone owning weapons. The point I am trying to make with this is the fact that no place they went met their expectations that wherever they end up must be better than where they were before. It’s intentional Hamid utilizes this because people today tend to avoid problems instead of learning to adapt to it. Maybe the better thing to do with some problems is just to thug it out because it will not always be better to escape the problem itself no matter how bad it is.

Mohsin Hamid’s Sensational Sentences

Mohsin Hamid, the critically acclaimed author of the 2017 novel Exit West, uses very unique syntax in order to make the scene “feel” like it is being elongated or shrunk. Hamid mainly uses a series of sentence fragments connected by commas to blur all the action together, and give the reader the impression that everything happens very quickly. On the contrary, short sentences aren’t uncommon either:  Sometimes sentences are 3 words, and sometimes they take up more than a page. By contrasting these two very different sentence structures, Hamid creates a very interesting perception of events in the story, seemingly making some events fly by while others are dragged on forever. Often times, the action is happening right in front of you and you can’t even tell because of the way that the story is structured. An example of this is the passage describing the woman on the train. The entire train ride is technically one sentence, but it’s more accurately a series of sentence fragments stitched together with commas to form one monster sentence. Hamid uses these technique throughout the novel, among many others, to showcase his unique and creative writing style. 

Door of Freedom vs. Door of Struggle

In the novel Exit West, Mohsin Hamid explores the complexity of the migrant experience. While the journey from home to a new setting is liberating and opens the door of freedom, the journey of exiting one’s closeness of culture, home, and family also opens the door of struggle. When Saeed and Nadia are moving locations, I feel like each city and country represents a different door being either the “normal door” of familiarity or the “black door” of uncertainty.

In the middle of the story when Saeed and Nadia are on the Greek Island of Mykonos, they observe and compare the reasoning or circumstances of being in this certain environment. (enjoyment vs. necessity) There could be some on an island for the reason of vacation and chilling at the beach or people like Saeed and Nadia at a refugee camp with tents and lean-tos who are involved in the migrant experience by constantly reflecting on their past and home while moving for the better of their safety.

I also think that while reading this novel, although both Nadia and Saeed have had experiences of going through the doors of freedom and struggle, Nadia represents the door of freedom while Saeed represents the door of struggle. It is evident throughout the novel that Nadia likes independence, control, and specifically isolation from her family and learning new ideas and being in new environments correlating towards freedom. On the other hand, Saeed had a close relationship with his parents growing up and was enhanced through prayer. But this migrant experience for Saeed was different when he left home and increased how much he prayed a day, moving houses with people from the same country, and even developing a new relationship at the of the novel with the preacher girl. This shows how much he struggled through his constant connection of home in new environments.

Exit West and Today

Exit West was a novel that was written in 2017 about mass migration throughout the world and the backlash to it. It would be wrong to say that Exit West predicted the current political climate. Immigration has been a large issue although it is certainly more in the spotlight in the current day. The current political climate in the United States has wreaked havoc among many of the immigrant communities like those in Exit West.

Even near Oak Park we have felt the destruction wrought by these policies. Berwyn is subject to many raids and recently an Oak Park trustee was detained and questioned by Immigration and Customs Enforcement. People are afraid to leave their houses due to fear of being encircled and trapped illegally without trial or any chance to escape.

The abuses of power have become so rampant that the official government website which details the constitution has removed sections relating to Habeas Corpus and although this has been attributed to a “coding error”, the change has yet to be reversed after a month.

Certainly with the knowledge of how we currently treat immigrants, Exit West seems to present an almost idealistic perspective on how the world might react to large numbers of people moving around.

Is Saeed less of a man than Nadia is?

In class, a question was posed that I’ve been thinking about a lot throughout my reading of the book. In Exit West, the two main characters, Nadia and Saeed, are a couple for most of the book, but who is the “man” of the relationship? This depends on your personal definition of what it means to be a man. I don’t believe that there is a single way to “be a man” or a woman. I think that Saeed and Nadia challenge the binaries we put on men and women. Saeed is kind, gentle, and patient. And Nadia isn’t very “womanly”; she’s, well, I don’t really know how to describe her, but I hope you know what I mean. I really enjoy it when the media switches the traditional gender personalities. It’s really refreshing and empowering to both men and women. Men should be taught that it’s okay and manly to be gentle and let themselves be emotional, and women should be taught to stick up for themselves, make their presence be known. If your personality isn’t in alignment with the binary that people put in place for men and women in relationships with each other, then that doesn’t make you less of a man or a woman, and we need to stop acting like it does.

Exiting Home

Mohsin Hamid’s Exit West is a complex book that uses magical doors to talk about the global refugee/migrant crisis in a new way. Although it was written in 2017, there are a lot of parallels to our current world. Instead of focusing on dangerous boat rides or boring legal battles, the story focuses on Saeed and Nadia’s emotional journey as they leave their war-torn city. This focus made me really feel the stress and loss they experience when they appear in a refugee camp in Greece, or later, a rich neighborhood in London. The book made me think about how weird it must be to suddenly have your entire world flipped upside down without a home. It also challenges the whole idea of “home”. Hamid makes me question if it’s a place, or just the people you are with. For many moments in the text, one could arguee Saeed and Nadia were home despite not actually being home. Even while they were over each other’s houses. The novel argues that everyone is a “migrant” through their own life, showing that we all go through big changes and loss over time. Overall, Exit West is a complex read because it helps you see beyond the news headlines and understand the real, personal struggles of people just trying to find a safe place to live ina  unqiue way.

The Stolen Baby Named Maria

In the film Trust, Maria undergoes a period of what most people would call an “existential crisis” after the death of her father. I would argue that her father’s death was not the true catalyst in her spiral towards self-reflection, though. I believe that meeting the woman at the gas station and her involvement with the stolen baby was what sent Maria off, almost forcefully starting her on her journey of finding her authentic self.

Once Maria and this woman had shared parts of their personal lives with each other, Maria felt she had some sort of unspoken connection with the lonely woman and with the experiences she shared with her. What really drew Maria to the woman was the stolen baby. It was as if Maria and the woman shared this part of each of their devastating stories with each other. Maria, at the time, was pregnant, and the woman was desperate for a baby to bring joy back into her life.

The disappearance of this baby, I believe, symbolized in a way the disappearance of the “old” Maria. The transition from the naive, youthful version to the dependent, serious one. Not that Maria was “innocent” before, but that sense of not knowing the ways the world could hurt you vanished from her identity after the baby vanished with this mystery woman.

Towards the end of the film, when Maria tracks down the woman’s husband and eventually shows up at their doorstep to see the woman, she finds that the woman had left the baby in a telephone booth. The entire lead-up to this moment, to finding the mystery woman and uncovering what had become of the baby, all seemed at the time, pointless. Especially because of the more serious events going on in Maria’s life, the whereabouts of a baby were not nearly as important as everything else happening around her. Except, Maria couldn’t seem to let it go. She was drawn to the woman and the missing baby despite the obvious fact that she had no goal or no idea what she was actually looking for or trying to accomplish.

The baby in the telephone booth was unharmed and found by the police. Maria faces a similar fate, being in the hands of what the public thought was a threat, aka Matthew and his grenade, but being scooped up by the police unharmed. In this parallel, the mystery woman and Matthew were both made out to be the monsters in their separate situations. But, in both cases, Maria knew that they were far from this, and she understood why they did what they did. Through this experience of truly seeing both of these people, for their heart and soul and not for their outward actions, Maria was transformed. She shed her selfish skin and became a selfless being who yearned to understand others, even when they resisted her. Untouched by a single lick of harm, Maria went through the most painful experience of truly understanding another human being.

 

 

What Does it Mean To Belong?

In the book Exit West by Mohsin Hamid Nadia and Saeed are able to move through magical doors to travel to different countries all around the world. However, as they move through the doors their sense of belonging constantly shifts and changes. At first, their relationship gives them a kind of “home” in each other, but as they pass through new countries and communities, that connection starts to fade. Hamid is trying to highlight the idea that as we change so does our sense of belonging. This suggests that sometimes we outgrow the people and places that once made us feel safe. This is what we see happen in the book through Nadia and Saeed’s relationship. Even though they have a strong bond and connection at the start of the book, that changes as they move to Mykonos, then London, and finally Marin. Through that traveling they start adapting in different ways and ultimately grow more distanced from each other. 

Exit West, The Stranger, and Weird Sentence Lengths

In Exit West, writer Mohsin Hamid showcases his unique writing style that contrasts the writing style of the last novel we read, The Stranger. In the Stranger, Albert Camus uses very short, stunted sentences to portray the factual and mundane personality of the main character. Meanwhile, Hamid often writes long, winding sentences that expand on previous parts of the sentence and give great detail about many characters, backstories, and situations to portray similar complexity in his characters. In my opinion, both of these stories touch upon the humanity of the characters and their complexity, but do so in very different ways.

The Stranger showcases the humanity of Meursault by giving brief facts about his life, because those facts are what come together to build his life in the story. Meursault as a character is shown to come off as simple and factual, much like the writing. This is the kind of person he is, his humanity–his form of humanity is shown through the sentence structure itself.

Exit West, on the other hand, goes into great detail with the characters’ lives. The sentences expand on themselves constantly, which leads to in-depth, page-long sentences. Some of these details may feel trivial, and oftentimes that’s because they are. Ultimately, however, they lend to not only more detailed world building, but also more detailed characters as well. Their actions and pasts that are explained in these long sentences contribute to their sense of humanity in the narrative from the perspective of the reader.

The characters live complex lives (as opposed to Meursault) and Exit West, therefore, has a much more complex writing style (as opposed to The Stranger).

Page 1 of 4

Powered by WordPress & Theme by Anders Norén