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Date: November 5, 2024

The Doors: Were They the Right Move?

When we first began reading Exit West by Mohsin Hamid in class, I was confused why Hamid decided to include magical doors that could lead an individual to a different country in his novel. I thought the presence of the doors took away from the seriousness or reality of the piece. Without the portals, the story could have been seen as more realistic, and readers would be more likely to see the real-world  implications.

One day in class, though, about when we were halfway through the book, Mr. Heidkamp had us listen to Hamid’s explanation for why he included the doors. He explained how by having Nadia and Saeed, and all migrants in the book, find doors to walk through instead of journeying to their new destination, it forces the audience to focus only on the stories and lives of the migrants before and after the migration. If Hamid were to include the long and treacherous journey of migrating to a new country or even continent, half the book – or at least a short, action-packed section of the book – would have to document the journey, and readers would only sympathize with or perceive the characters through the lens of their journey.

I know many others shared the opinion I had when I first started reading this book: they feel that the doors make the story seem too magical or too unrealistic. But, I hope those people take the time to truly listen to what Hamid has to say about the portals. His explanation made me realize the true perspective of a migrant, and how the media on migrants today take away from the real stories and voices of millions. The media crafts a perspective of only just the journey of migration, stating things like “Boats of Hundreds Docks in Italy from Africa.” Instead, Exit West forces the audience to perceive Nadia and Saeed’s life, not journey.

Why did Saeed and Nadia break up?

After reading Exit West I’ve been particularly interested in analyzing what caused Saeed and Nadia’s splitting.

One of the key reasons I believe Saeed and Nadia split is because of their core values and goals were starkly different. From the get go, we are shown that Saeed is a family orientated and spiritual person through his devotion to prayer and his personal convictions. Nadia, on the other hand is extremely independent and free-spirited demonstrated through her living alone and connection to her phone. While people don’t need to hold the exact same values and characteristics, there should be some harmony and mutual understanding for a relationship to prosper. Sure, Nadia’s independence and wildness interested Saeed, but when it came down to important decisions and behaviors they had very different perspectives. In London, Saeed felt tempted to move into a home full of people of similar culture and nationality as him, while Nadia wanted to stay in the house with Nigerians because there she was provided privacy and independence. Throughout the novel, Saeed is constantly praying to ground him and connect him to his home country while we see Nadia does not once pray in the novel as it holds no significance in her life. These critical differences help explain why Nadia and Saeed’s relationship did not prosper.

Another reason I feel Saeed and Nadia’s relationship failed was because the war expedited their relationship. After knowing each other for a few months, Saeed and Nadia moved in together due to the progression of the war. In addition Saeed and Nadia leave the country together, having to solely depend on one another. While they have to act similar to a married couple, they have little experience with one another. As seen in Mykos, when Nadia admits to seeing bitterness in Saeed for the first time in their relationship despite them being together for months. The war forced Nadia and Saeed to depend on each other not allowing time for them to really get to know each other and slowly grow their relationship.

I believe that Exit West is a wonderful example of the effects war has on an individual’s character and relationships as seen with Nadia and Saeed.

 

 

 

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The Significance of the Vignettes in Exit West

While reading Exit West I was puzzled by the use of Vignettes in the novel. I had trouble seeing the reasoning behind the short passages about Old Ladies in lavish houses and a little girl standing up for what she believes, in Europe. Throughout the story the author uses Vignettes to broaden the world outside of the two characters in which the world revolves. At the books beginning for example doors are first being introduced to the reader. Doors are a foreign concept to the reader so the author creates a way of explaining the idea to the reader without outwardly stating it.

By using Vignettes, the author is coloring in the world outside of the story. The author is creating without restraining. The author is conveying to the reader that there is more going on in the world than what is made clear in the majority of the book. In conclusion the micro segments throughout the book serve to deepen the impact of a seemingly two dimensional journey to the west story.

Bonded or Love?

As Saeed and Nadia’s relationship progresses throughout the novel it makes me wonder if they were ever in love. When they start their relationship the two bond over commonalities, they share being fearful of what is to come in their country and Saeed’s mother dying. Although they are raised very differently they are still able to form connections and companionship with one another. As the two migrate and face trauma together it makes me wonder if their bond is remaining out of companionship for one and other when facing these difficult times or if they actually want to be together. In addition to this, the two are with each other all the time and perhaps grow indifferent to each other because of the lack of space they have from each other.

However, Saeed and Nadia do not agree on many topics based on their upbringing and regularly have small arguments about it. For example, in London Saeed wanted to live with people from their home while Nadia wanted to stay in their current living quarters; showing their fundamental differences. Was it their initial differences that ultimately separated them or their experiences together? Personally, I believe it was a combination of both.

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